"Hold My Hand"

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On 06/04/2013 at 08:40 PM by Kayshire Cat

So here is a poem I wrote for a special friend (not giving a name cause you should know by now :P) She told me to post it in public after giving it to her so here.

Would you mind if I asked
Asked if I could hold your hand
Would you care if I sat next to you
C’mon baby you got nothing to lose

Would you mind if I held you in my arms
Held you so very close to my own heart
Would you care if I stared into those gorgeous eyes
C’mon baby you got nothing to hide

I might actually try blogging again soon. I've just been a little busy still, but if anyone cares. I've been playing Bioshock Infinite, Fuse, and P3P lately. I'll have something else up soon.

~Fin

Comments

Lazlowe1984

06/04/2013 at 08:57 PM

Its been a year since you began this particular journey.

Ken you believe it?

Kayshire Cat

06/04/2013 at 08:59 PM

No I Kayn't!

GeminiMan78

06/04/2013 at 09:42 PM

This has a really musical rhythm, deffinately has some song potential. Very nice.

Patrick Kijek Contributing Writer

06/05/2013 at 01:53 AM

Yea I was thinking that this looks more like a song in the making, too.

Kayshire Cat

06/05/2013 at 02:21 AM

Heh well i'd eventually like to put some of my poetry to music some day :)

Matt Snee Staff Writer

06/04/2013 at 10:12 PM

how is Fuse?

Kayshire Cat

06/05/2013 at 02:22 AM

I like it a lot nothing groundbreaking or original but its a solid 3rd person shooter

Alex-C25

06/04/2013 at 10:14 PM

Quite liked the poem. Very short, but straightforward. If sung, it could fit easily in a 70s Rock love song or a Led Zeppelin tune.

Kayshire Cat

06/05/2013 at 02:24 AM

lol id probably rather put it to Ska :P

leeradical42

06/05/2013 at 02:01 PM

Very much lyrical would make a good song nice poem though.

smartcelt

06/05/2013 at 03:25 PM

Very lovely poem. You write some very touching poetry. I tried the Fuse demo yesterday and thought it was a blast. Have to get that one at some point. The characters are pretty cool.