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Shine Peacock Shine


On 07/02/2013 at 09:22 AM by Homelessrook

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SHINE PEACOCK SHINE

Just so perfect

I do not think so

Parade around like a dumb fuck

Teeth gleam white

Smiling at the power you think you have

Your power stops at the door

Your control ends at 5

Give me a fucking break

You do it for you

No one else


 

Comments

Matt Snee Staff Writer

07/02/2013 at 09:26 AM

?

Homelessrook

07/02/2013 at 09:28 AM

Power abuse.

Matt Snee Staff Writer

07/02/2013 at 09:30 AM

there's nothing like pissed-off poetry.  Smile

Homelessrook

07/02/2013 at 09:33 AM

Sometimes it is write it out or choke them out.lol.

leeradical42

07/02/2013 at 11:43 AM

Power trip lol!!!

Homelessrook

07/02/2013 at 05:49 PM

some people get on them lol.

smartcelt

07/02/2013 at 12:12 PM

Is this about someone where you work? Sounds like you may have a pocket dictator on your hands. Big fish in a small pond,perhaps? Dealt with that before. Good poem,gets right to the point!

Homelessrook

07/02/2013 at 05:50 PM

I think it was an old boss.

Chris Yarger Community Manager

07/02/2013 at 12:44 PM

Hmm.. I should print this out and leave it on my boss' desk...

Homelessrook

07/02/2013 at 05:50 PM

LOL. Go for it.

Ranger1

07/02/2013 at 01:36 PM

Left that particular boss behind a while ago.

Homelessrook

07/02/2013 at 05:50 PM

Good, it is easier to work without some one like that.

Super Step Contributing Writer

07/02/2013 at 02:29 PM

I read "Shine Peacock Shine" to the tune of "Ride Captain Ride" by Blues Image. Well, that's not the lighthearted direction this went at all! lol

I've been lucky to have some pretty decent bosses, but I can definitely relate to the frustration with even those sometimes. Although they weren't always smiling. lol I shouldn't talk, I've probably come across this way that one year I was an assistant manager.

Maybe this guy acts that way cause he's a peacock with a pea cock? Now that, I can't relate to. Cool Anyway, is this an old boss, or did you come out of retirement for a bit and get a jackass? Or is it about a boss at all?

Homelessrook

07/02/2013 at 05:52 PM

Old Boss. I just found it in my notebooks and decided to post it. I have notebooks full. I have been published a few times in some local free papers and I have done spoken word.

Alex-C25

07/02/2013 at 07:18 PM

Sometimes you gotta let the frustration flow. This piece was one of those times.

Homelessrook

07/02/2013 at 08:06 PM

I have a few.lol.

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