Forgot password?  |  Register  |    
User Name:     Password:    
Blog - General Entry   

"Run Away"


On 03/01/2013 at 01:14 AM by Kayshire Cat

See More From This User »

Since I'll be posting my blogs here instead of 1up I guess maybe I should do a poem since I posted a lot of them back there too. It's been awhile so forgive if it's terrible, and it's not really happy, so there's that. The pictures I randomly through in it might make some of you smile though :P

We've been here before

I remember this place

The clothes that you wore

The look on your face

You told me you loved me

You promised to stay

I showed you everything you wanted to see

And all you did was run away

I've been here before

I remember this feeling

The holes that it tore

The way it sent me reeling

I said I loved you

I promised I wouldn't go away

What else was i supposed to do

How else could I make you stay



 

Comments

TripOpt55

03/01/2013 at 01:22 AM

Nice poem and pictures Kay.

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 01:32 AM

Thanks :)

Matt Snee Staff Writer

03/01/2013 at 01:40 AM

Authoritatively pink font.  I like your poem.  I've never had much luck writing poems.  

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 01:43 AM

I've been writing poetry since I was 15-16. Not all of it's very good though especially from that era.

Casey Curran Staff Writer

03/01/2013 at 02:55 AM

Always like seeing your poetry Kay. I remember writing quite a few good ones at school. Only problem was I hated writing it. When I write, I need more possibilities for Assassin's Creed bashing or squeezing in an orgy scene.

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 12:25 PM

Write a poem about people bashing Assassin's Creed 3 while having an orgy?

Ranger1

03/01/2013 at 07:58 AM

I like your poetry, Kay. Glad to see you still posting it.

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 12:26 PM

As long as I keep writing it I'll keep posting it :)

Homelessrook

03/01/2013 at 08:13 AM

Very nice. I write poetry and in the past done spoken word stuff. Have you vere been published? Thank you for sharing with us.

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 12:26 PM

Haven't been published, no. Never really felt like I needed to be or anything I guess

avidacridjam

03/01/2013 at 08:55 AM

A very thoughtful poem. Good pictures as well!

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 12:27 PM

Thanks

chocobot

03/01/2013 at 01:24 PM

Lovely poem, Kay. I gave poetry a try when I was younger but it just not was my thing. You've got a talent for it though.

I like the pictures too..

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 01:55 PM

Not as lovely as you :P

Anyways thanks :) and if you do have any of your poetry still I'd love to see it.

BrokenH

03/01/2013 at 01:30 PM

It is a good poem, though quite sad. I think everyone has felt this way before so it's quite easy to relate to it. Love is BRUTAL!

mothman

03/01/2013 at 01:34 PM

No Ben, people are brutal. Love is wonderful thing. It is only when you introduce humans that it becomes fucked up. :)

BrokenH

03/01/2013 at 01:41 PM

Damn it Pete, stop being so eloquent and smart! You're making me look bad! lol.

It's true though. Love is beautiful and it's unfortunate we find so many ways to mess it up.

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 01:59 PM

I agree a lot of people just don't seem to understand love or what they want from it, and end up getting scared. It's sad, really.

pspiddy

03/01/2013 at 08:50 PM

Must dissociate words from pictures...pretty words and then boom! A picture that makes me think with the wrong head.

Kayshire Cat

03/01/2013 at 08:54 PM

I always think with the wrong head. Doesn't make as much sense when I say it though :P

AzureAlchemist

03/04/2013 at 08:14 PM

Hehe..Glad to see Kay still motivated..Meanwhile even before 1Up announced it's close I still have a hard time telling exactly where people I know go exactly these days,I guess mostly the first few friends I made at 1Up at the start..Since I know Marc's butt is super glued to twitter..:P

smartcelt

03/07/2013 at 03:35 PM

That was a really great poem. It conveys a lot of emotion,as good poetry will often do. Thought provoking as well. That is just my favorite sort of poem.

TheMart22

03/07/2013 at 03:41 PM

I tried writing poetry a few years back and it's a lot tougher than some people think. Thanks for sharing, I never could Embarassed

Jamie Alston Staff Writer

03/07/2013 at 10:29 PM

Good stuff.  reminds me of the first time I posted a poem on 1Up.  I was kinda shy about putting it up, but it was surprisingly well-received.

Lazlowe1984

05/13/2013 at 01:08 AM

Within the heart of every confused girl beats the heart of a poet.Within the mind of Kay she is beating us off. 

Kayshire Cat

05/13/2013 at 02:11 AM

My heart and mind are as one :P

Log in to your PixlBit account in the bar above or join the site to leave a comment.